Maybe too strong right at the very start.
Nevertheless it was really awesome!
I loved the abnormal rhythm at 0:25
And even more so that it faded out to just drums, and it was excellent the way it came back in.
Ending was too soon, and the track was too short.
Would have benefited from a "B" section to compliment the main melody.
Could have been mixed better. Too much kick drum, I think.
4/5.