Ragamuffin's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Clown]

This is maybe my favorite things I've seen from you. I'm not sure why this exists, but it's kind of pushing on that "this is a bit too wonky" feeling. The caricature-like proportions in the face are really cool. Actually, faces are one of the things that I do really particularly bad. The thing I would pick apart though, is that the eyes are a bit too extreme, and take up all of the natural space that faces usually have, making the image kind of not so great to look at.

Jabalclown responds:

thank you for your honesty and your useful criticism...it really helps me...even if, because of my english, i don't understand the expression " pushing on that"this is a bit too wonky" feeling"...thanks a lot anyway

[smoking henchman]

This one is actually really cool. even aside from being a seemingly meaningless bit on the outside, it still kind of squishes in a tiny bit of story-telling. Really interesting. And the squishy effect on the body makes him look so cuddly. I want one. .u.

Jabalclown responds:

cuddly ? ok i wanted to make him look badass but.... :)

[rose tattoo]

I didn't get the "pages" feel until I read that's what it was, so you might want to emphasize there a lot. If someone is going to permanently imbed this in their body, it's got to be spot-on. Otherwise, it's pretty cool.

Jabalclown responds:

thank you, i'll try to follow your suggestion...ovviously this was only a first try , a sketch because i've never done flowers