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In Love-Techwave In Love-Techwave

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Cool intro! Very sparky and alive.
The drums repeat quite a bit before anything happens. The noise rise is cool, but could have started earlier to create more anticipation. The next few hits are cool, but I can hear a lot of limiter distortion. Not sure if intentional or not, but worth noting. The wobbly unstable sounding chord stabs are a delight. So are the high, creamy leads. Perhaps the S&H bass sound isn't so amazing. I like the idea but it could have been better executed.
Around here it becomes less interesting. I would liked to have heard tonal variations, and perhaps other chord structures or scales, but it's quite nice for what it is.
Solid 3.5; above average composition and average production.


techwave responds:

i see where u are coming from..Thanks for the comment i will work on those things for sure.

Techwave


Heisenberg Crystals Heisenberg Crystals

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Sounds a bit harsh. Interesting though.
It is perhaps a bit too sharp and imposingly large to be in the background of a video game. Try to go for a more controlled, level spectrum of tones that don't push straight to the front so much.

Strong 2.5


Bloodtype8 responds:

Thank you for the feedback! :)


The End The End

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I actually loved the drum sound. Very different. The harmonic/melodic elements were awesome as well. Work on the structure, though. Generally think of the track progressing as climbing a slide for 2/3s of it, and throwing your hands up and sliding down for the last 1/3. This image can kind of get a feel for how rise and climax works, but of course there are variations, and different ways to do it.


riaki responds:

Thank you for this feedback i will keep this in mind for my next one..

Recent Art Reviews


Green Clown Green Clown

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This is maybe my favorite things I've seen from you. I'm not sure why this exists, but it's kind of pushing on that "this is a bit too wonky" feeling. The caricature-like proportions in the face are really cool. Actually, faces are one of the things that I do really particularly bad. The thing I would pick apart though, is that the eyes are a bit too extreme, and take up all of the natural space that faces usually have, making the image kind of not so great to look at.


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Jabalclown responds:

thank you for your honesty and your useful criticism...it really helps me...even if, because of my english, i don't understand the expression " pushing on that"this is a bit too wonky" feeling"...thanks a lot anyway


smoking henchman smoking henchman

Rated 4 / 5 stars

This one is actually really cool. even aside from being a seemingly meaningless bit on the outside, it still kind of squishes in a tiny bit of story-telling. Really interesting. And the squishy effect on the body makes him look so cuddly. I want one. .u.


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Jabalclown responds:

cuddly ? ok i wanted to make him look badass but.... :)


rose tattoo rose tattoo

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I didn't get the "pages" feel until I read that's what it was, so you might want to emphasize there a lot. If someone is going to permanently imbed this in their body, it's got to be spot-on. Otherwise, it's pretty cool.


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Jabalclown responds:

thank you, i'll try to follow your suggestion...ovviously this was only a first try , a sketch because i've never done flowers